Baked to Imperfection
I wonder, what went into the making of man?
Was there a recipe? Did G-d follow it exactly?
1 teaspoon resilience,
2 tablespoons of humor,
1 pinch zest for life, a hint of empathy.
Or, perhaps it was a bit less precise.
I wonder, what went into the making of man?
A little honesty and
some compassion,
A strong urge to prove himself?
And then perhaps, after mixing the dry,
Did he add together the wet ingredients?
1 dollop of greed,
a dash of self-interest,
Did he think perhaps more was still missing?
Did he add a dash of caprice?
A fistful of cowardice?
A smidgen of cynicism?
A drop of ego?
I wonder, at what temperature did G-d cook man?
Was it 350°?
400°?
Until golden brown?
Or did He saute man till fragrant?
I wonder, what went into the baking of man?
For what recipe could have created such a consistency?
A little bit crisp on the outside but warm and soft within.
With so much soul,
A bit of heart,
And so little mind.
this was such a charming poem! i love the sentiment strung throughout and the ending feels very rich and powerful. I think at points it felt a little redundant; maybe it could benefit from an expansion of the ideas your working with. just a thought!
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